2010年11月10日 星期三

英文造句

有時候英文寫得不太好,主管會幫忙修正,以下就是兩個例子。



原本的句子:

The header is now fixed in xxxx. However, xxxx is not fixed yet. xxx is opened for this problem.

被修改的句子:

The header is now fixed in xxxx. However, xxxx is not fixed yet. xxx is opened for this problem, and hope to get fixed in future release. If you still concern. please let us know.



原本的句子:

Could we deliver the schedule?

被修改的句子:

Thank you for the good work on xxx. We have received a long list of must-fix issues, and developers are working hard and still need more time to fix isseues. We hope to deliver a quality build with more issues fixing to you, therefore, pass 2 will be moved to Nov 15 instead. We apologized for any incontinence caused for this schedule change, If you have any concern to preform run on Nov 15, please let me know immediately.